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Old 11-04-2010, 06:38 AM   #1
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I started writing a little commentary on Disney's the Hunchback of Notre Dame.
Here it is. Please tell me what you're thinking.
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Just for the books: Cim lost the war.
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Old 09-30-2011, 12:56 AM   #2
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OMG. LOL.
They were in stitches.
"More screen time for Clopin! We learn that Frollo names the boy Quasimodo, which means "half formed" (Hey, at least he put some creativity into the naming), and raises him off screen. "
-by Neowitch

That made me spit my candy. haha. I just read it, and I find it good.
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Old 09-30-2011, 12:58 AM   #3
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"Why somebody would tell such a story to children is a mystery to me. Rumors say that Clopin was severely beaten up by a mob of indignant mothers afterwards."
-Neowitch

LOL. XD
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Time to bury some fools,
My tail, my claws,
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My only way to live - KILLING
And enemies shall do my bidding,
But they go crazy, roll around, smearing.

I, the Sand King, will live forever,
But does that matter?
I will crush everything, As fast as the wind sever!


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Old 09-30-2011, 01:34 AM   #4
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Thanks a lot.^^
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Just for the books: Cim lost the war.
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Old 09-30-2011, 01:38 AM   #5
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Haha, when I started replying to your posts, I do get interested! This crack, Can I print this stuff so I can read again? You should continue that. Update me here.
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Time to bury some fools,
My tail, my claws,
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My only way to live - KILLING
And enemies shall do my bidding,
But they go crazy, roll around, smearing.

I, the Sand King, will live forever,
But does that matter?
I will crush everything, As fast as the wind sever!


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Old 09-30-2011, 01:41 AM   #6
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I kinda ran out of jokes. Part 2 needs a re-write. Also I feel like the very first one I wrote, which summarized the entire move was funnier.
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Old 09-30-2011, 01:46 AM   #7
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Awww.. But do you still continue with the project? I wanna read more.
Its been long that I read such...such work of art!.
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Time to bury some fools,
My tail, my claws,
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My only way to live - KILLING
And enemies shall do my bidding,
But they go crazy, roll around, smearing.

I, the Sand King, will live forever,
But does that matter?
I will crush everything, As fast as the wind sever!


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Old 09-30-2011, 01:50 AM   #8
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Once I find the time.
I have to write the plot for a Visual Novel as a semester project. But since it's a serious story chances are high I will come back to that crack thing since I like to write something funny once in a while.
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Old 09-30-2011, 01:53 AM   #9
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Woah... you amaze me. You can do that? When I write, I get sucked and stop.

But I am happy that there is a high chance you can make crack-ups.
Have you wrote more of these?
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Like the Sand King of Chaos..

Time to bury some fools,
My tail, my claws,
Such good destruction tools!

My only way to live - KILLING
And enemies shall do my bidding,
But they go crazy, roll around, smearing.

I, the Sand King, will live forever,
But does that matter?
I will crush everything, As fast as the wind sever!


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Old 09-30-2011, 01:58 AM   #10
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Well, there is a part 2: http://neowitch.deviantart.com/art/H...y-II-185045011
And the short summary of the movie: http://neowitch.deviantart.com/gallery/#/d31ysyh
That's about it so far.

Personally I think that I suck at writing. I'm too slow since I correct every sentence until it sounds right resulting in short or unfinished texts.
But that is why I chose to do that freaking Visual Novel project. To learn and improve myself. (Man, I'm sucha masochist...)
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He can get a lawn chair instead of his basket and one extra meal on sundays if he asks nicely.
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